Cats vs Dogs…
Today I am going to be writing about persuasive writing, which is going to be about what I like
better out of cats or dogs.My personal opinion is going to be that I like dogs better and here's
why…. First of all is going to be because they are so much fun to hang out with and do things
with, like for instance, you can't really throw a stick and expect a cat to run and grab it for you,
but you can with a dog. There is so much more you can do with a dog such as, take it places,
yeah you can do that with cats but not as often.
You can train it to do things like: rollover, sit, stay, handshake, fetch, drop, ect, I mean you can't better out of cats or dogs.My personal opinion is going to be that I like dogs better and here's
why…. First of all is going to be because they are so much fun to hang out with and do things
with, like for instance, you can't really throw a stick and expect a cat to run and grab it for you,
but you can with a dog. There is so much more you can do with a dog such as, take it places,
yeah you can do that with cats but not as often.
teach a cat to do most of those things.
They are great guard dogs as well, big or small they would be amazing if you trained them right
to attack someone with a special code word, why do you think police have dogs as a
protectors? Actually back on the police, dogs also have marvelous scenes, that's why they use
them to sniff out drugs in raids.
Not to mention how damn adorable they are! to attack someone with a special code word, why do you think police have dogs as a
protectors? Actually back on the police, dogs also have marvelous scenes, that's why they use
them to sniff out drugs in raids.
They are very Loyal pets as well, if you give it enough attention and love they will be the best
pets!
That is my opinion on dogs so i reckon that they are better pets than dogs.This was quite are hard debate though because i'm also in love with cats, they are both very
cute and perfects pets.
Thanks you for reading this.
Hi Sita I really like how many reasons you put down for why you like dogs better. I personally love dogs and cats. I can see very clearly that you like dogs better than cats and I can see your reasons.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Sita!
ReplyDeleteYou have great control over your punctuation and you use many different types effectively in your writing. This is an advanced skill, so well done to you.
I really enjoyed reading your piece and hearing why you think dogs are better. You had great ideas to support your choice.
My suggestion would be to really focus on having a strong ending. After all your great points and evidence, the ending fell a little short for me, as you started to go back on your points to compliment cats! This takes away from the strong arguments above.
- Miss Birtch