My Writing

Hey guys Today I am looking at my progress in writing!

So what I am doing is I am going to be sharing a sreen shot of my not so best writing and a screen shot of another piece of writing that I have done later on to see how I have got better!

Here is my not so good one:

The thing I think I did not so good with here is that I didnt use much descriptive words to make my writing really interesting.

Here is my good one:

I think I did good here because I had way more descriptive words and I made it more interesting!

This is how I think I have improved in wrting!

Thats all for now BYEEE!!!!