My Writing
Hey guys Today I am looking at my progress in writing!
So what I am doing is I am going to be sharing a sreen shot of my not so best writing and a screen shot of another piece of writing that I have done later on to see how I have got better!
Here is my not so good one:
The thing I think I did not so good with here is that I didnt use much descriptive words to make my writing really interesting.
Here is my good one:
I think I did good here because I had way more descriptive words and I made it more interesting!
This is how I think I have improved in wrting!
Thats all for now BYEEE!!!!